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November 22, 2009


Bob Knaus

Simon, I've said this before, and I'll say it again. You are good, but you're prolix. Cut the length of your articles in half, and you will double your readership.

Bahamians may like their sermons of stupendous length and rife with sesquipedalians, but this ain't church. Cut it short, and you will get you message across better.

BTW, I agree with you, if you hadn't noticed.

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